Written by:
Over the Oceans I do sway.
Into bodies I promote decay.
In the clocks they track me.
Under thermodynamic guises, I cool tea.
Outside of nothing apparent.
Out of typical logic transparent.
On a bad day I am slow.
Off duties, forget me and go.
By and by they curse my name.
For I am a force they’ll never tame.
Prompt: https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/05/11/w3-prompt-2-weave-written-weekly/
I love the perspective of time here.
Thank you 🙂 It was a funny way of looking at it and I had fun with using propositions at the start of each line.
Under thermodynamic guises, I cool tea.
I LOVE this line, Brigid!
Much love,
David
Thank you David! Throwback to when I was a chemistry major.
Love,
Brigid Faye
‘In the clocks they track me’ – my favourite line. Beautiful poem and I love the handwritten version of it.
Thank you Britta, I like handwriting my poetry so I got a ReMarkable tablet. I highly recommend the product for people who like writing.
Hi, Brigid! <3
I just want to let you know that the 4th W3 prompt, hosted by Kerfe Roig, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/05/25/w3-prompt-4-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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